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Reviews for An Ill-fated Kiss

Review #221 . This book was rated 3 Stars by this reviewer
What a disasterous life, but a glorius future!
Review: What I liked:	Anna has the worst luck. When she falls into the hands of a second killer, I cried 'come on' until her ill-fated kiss connects all her bad luck to one lethal person. Then I was 'all right!' I was really glad I kept reading. I hadn't seen it coming.
Areas that could be improved:	Proofing!!!! Lots of things done against the 'rules' in this book. The first guy introduced is not the ultimate winner of the lady. Anna's bad luck is so extreme that it almost appears to be a contrivance, until the real contriver is identified. And that reveal is not as dramatic as I would like...or maybe I'm just numb from all the action. Hard to say.