Reference links that may help you when writing:
Critique Assistance:
http://www.critique.org/users/critters/ -Free critiques and reviews of novel (or chapters) for Science Fiction, Fantasy and Supernatural Genre's as long as you are willing to reciprocate and do the same for other authors.
http://www.romancecritters.com/ - Free writer critiques and advice for the Romance novelist. Highly recommended by an Author Member. She says the critiques are excellent.